Sunday, February 15, 2009

Self Portrait: Revised


5 comments:

  1. Looks great! I'm glad to see that you added a bit of paper crumpling/water marks behind the text in the lower left corner.

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  2. The whole background seems to be darker, and its working the piece seems more coherent. great job!

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  3. I like that you darkened some of the colors and made the background more textured. the whole piece looks awesome! your skin looks great!

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  4. I didn't think much change needed to be done to make this piece any more successful than it already was. I like the darkened tones and added texture however, it certainly only adds more dimension and doesn't distract from the image.

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  5. The darker tones on your body and in the background created more contrast and it looks great! I also like the bolded text of certain words, it makes sense to highlight those since your eye is automatically drawn to them anyways. The final piece looks great!

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